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Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo FANPAGE : LUYỆN NGHE TIẾNG ANH __BOOST YOUR VOCABULARY FOR IELTS WRITING_ Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Content 1. Education 2. Crime 3. Diet, fitness and health 4. Work 5. Information technology 6. Environment 7. Science 8. The Arts Source: http://www.ieltsbuddy.com/ Combined and collected by Ad heo =)))) Admin : Heo Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Education Vocabulary 1. Graduate (v) To complete a first university degree successfully I graduated from the University of Salford in 2009. My graduation ceremony was in 2009. 2. Curriculum (n) The group of subjects studied in a school, college, etc. Schools must ensure they have an excellent curriculum. 3. Qualification (n) An official record showing that you have finished a training course or have the necessary skills, etc. Good qualifications are really important if you want to get a well-paid job. I am qualified to teach English. 4. Coursework (n) Regular work done by students as part of a course, but assessed independently of formal exams. The coursework on my degree was really difficult. 5. Co-educational (adj) When male and female students are taught together in the same school or college rather than separately. Co-educational schools prepare students for their future better than single-sex schools. 6. Cheat (v) To behave in a dishonest way in order to get what you want He did really well in his exams but he cheated. He copied from a friend. Cheating on exams is not recommended. 7. Literacy (n) The ability to read and write. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Literacy rates have declined considerably in Western countries over the last decade. However, most children are literate. 8. Illiterate (adj) Unable to read and write Many children in the poorest countries are illiterate. 9. Primary (elementary) Education First years of formal education from around age 5 to 11. A good primary education is crucial for a child's development. 10. Secondary Education Education during the time as a teenager. I loved it at my secondary school as I had so many friends. 11. Higher (tertiary) Education Non-compulsory education after finishing school, such as university, as well as vocational education and training at colleges. 60% of children now go into higher education after they finish school. 12. Concentrate To direct your attention or your efforts towards a particular activity, subject or problem. It is difficult to concentrate on my work if there is a lot of noise. I keep losing concentration due to the noise. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Crime Vocabulary 1. Legislation A law or set of laws suggested by a government and made official by a parliament. There needs to be changes to crime-relatedlegislation. 2. Deter To make someone less enthusiastic about doing something by threatening bad results if they do it. Tougher prison sentences may be a deterrent toother would-be offenders. 3. Offender Someone who is guilty of a crime. Prison should not be used for first-time offenders. 4. Punish To cause someone who has done something wrong or committed a crime to suffer, by hurting them, forcing them to pay money, sending them to prison, etc Those responsible for serious crimes must bepunished. 5. Prevention When you stop something from happening or stop someone from doing something. The government should focus on the prevention of crime rather than introducing harsher prison sentences. 6. Commit To do something illegal or something that is considered wrong. People who commit serious crimes should be given lengthy (long) prison sentences. 7. Criminal A person who commits a crime. Criminals who commit violent crimes should not be given probation. 8. Probation Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo A period of time when a criminal must behave well and not commit any more crimes in order to avoid being sent to prison. Probation is a good way to reduce prison overcrowding, but it must only be used for those who have committed minor crimes. 9. Rehabilitate To return someone or something to a good or healthy condition, state or way of living. It is important to rehabilitate criminals while they are in prison otherwise they may reoffend (commit a crime again) when they are released from prison. 10. Guilt Having done something wrong or committed a crime. If jurors (the members of a jury) find a defendantguilty, then that person must be punished. 11. Jury A group of people chosen to decide in a court of law if someone is guilty of a crime or not To ensure fairness in a criminal trial, there must be a jury. 12. Convict To decide officially in a court of law that someone is guilty of a crime. He has been convicted of arson (starting a fire intentionally to damage something) two times now. 13. Fine Being made to pay money for breaking the law. Motorists should be given a fine if they are caught speeding. 14. Imprisonment Being put in prison. Murderers are usually given life imprisonment. 15. Community Service Work that people do to help other people without payment, and which young criminals whose crime was not serious enough for them to be put in prison are sometimes ordered to do. Community service is a good alternative to prison for minor offences. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo 16. Justice Fairness in the way people are dealt with. Those who commit assaults must be imprisoned because the victims want justice. 17. Victim Someone who has suffered because of the actions of someone else. The victims of crime often need help and support to recover from their bad experience. __________________________________________________________________________ Essay Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. IELTS Essays - Model Answer Crime is a serious and growing problem in most societies. Although many people believe that the best way to tackle this is to place people in prison for longer periods, others are of the opinion that other measures will be more effective. There are benefits of giving offenders longer prison sentences. Firstly, spending a long time in prison provides an opportunity for the prison services to rehabilitate a prisoner. For example, someone who has committed a serious offence such as assault will need a long time in prison in order to be sure they can be re-educated not to re-offend. In addition to this, longer prison sentences will act as a deterrent for someone who is thinking of committing a crime. However, some people argue that leaving people in prison for a long time means that they will mix with other criminals and so their character will not improve. One alternative is community service. This gives an offender the opportunity to give something positive back to society, and so it may improve their character. Also, the government could focus its resources on the causes of crime, which would lead to less crime in the future. In my opinion, it is important to look at alternative methods. Many countries have lengthy prison sentences, but crime has continued to increase throughout the world, so it is clear that this is not completely effective. That said, long prison sentences should remain for those who commit serious crimes such as assault or murder, as justice for the victim and their family should take priority. To conclude, there are good arguments for and against long sentences, so governments must continue to research the various methods of crime reduction to ensure effective policies are in place. (290 words) Comments Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo The writer of this essay has produced a well balanced and coherent piece of writing. They clearly answer the question. The first body paragraph is dedicated to discussing the merits of long sentences, and the second body looks at alternative methods. Finally, the writer provides their own opinion on the issue. Very important for IELTS essays, each paragraph has a clear central topic which is expanded upon in the supporting sentences. Regarding grammar, the writer has successfully demonstrated their ability to use a mix of sentence structures, including a variety of complex sentences (although... someone who... in order to... means that... which would...). Ideas are coherently presented by using transition words (Firstly,... For example,... In addition to this,... However, .... In my opinion,... To conclude,...).. It is important in IELTS essays to have good topic related vocabulary in order to achieve a higher score, and this is evident in this piece of work (re-offend... rehabilitate... re-educated... deterrent... committing a crime...).. Also of importance with regards to vocabulary is to vary your word choices and not to repeat the same word. This can be done by using synonyms, as the writer has done with the word alternative 'ways', using variations of this (methods... measures...). Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Fitness, Diet and Health Vocabulary 1. Overweight Fat 70% of the population is now overweight according to official figures. 2. Obesity Extrememly fat or overweight. Obesity is now a real problem for teenagers. Teenagers who are obese are often bullied at school. 3. Eating Disorder A mental illness in which people eat far too little or far too much food and are unhappy with their bodies. Bulimia and anorexia are types of eating disorder. Both are becoming more common. 4. Nutrients Any substance which plants or animals need in order to live and grow. A healthy diet should consist of all the essentialnutrients. This meal is very nutritious. 5. Diet The food and drink usually eaten or drunk by a person or group.OR When someone eats less food, or only particular types of food, because they want to become thinner or for medical reasons. It is important to have a healthy diet. People must eat plenty of fruit and vegetables. I've been on a diet now for four weeks, and I've lost about one kilo. 6. Overeating Eating more than your body needs. There is evidence that overeating is one of the main causes of obesity.. 7. Ingredients A food that is used with other foods in the preparation of a particular dish. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo The ingredients of the dish include nuts, raisins, and parsley. 8. Allergy A condition that makes a person become ill or develop skin or breathing problems because they have eaten certain foods or been near certain substances. Allergies are becoming more common, and this could be connected to diet. If I eat nuts, I have an allergic reaction. I cannot breath properly. 9. Additive A substance which is added to food in order to improve its taste or appearance or to preserve it. This food is full of additives so I'm not going to eat it. 10. Prevent To stop something from happening. Lots of exercise will prevent a heart attack. The prevention of health problems should be encouraged by the government. For example, they could ban the advertising of fast food to children. 11. Variety Often changing and being different. When preparing meals, you need to think aboutvariety and taste as well as nutritional value. 12. Appetite When you want to eat food. All that exercise has given me an appetite. 13. Fibre A substance in foods such as fruit, vegetables and brown bread, which travels through the body as waste and helps the contents of the bowels to pass through the body easily. A diet that is high in fibre is important in order to maintain a healthy body. 14. Regular Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Happening or doing something often. Regular physical exercise is important for good health. 15. Vitamins Any of a group of natural substances which are necessary in small amounts for the growth and good health of the body. Many people take vitamin supplements these days in order to keep their body healthy. 16. Diabetes A disease in which the body cannot control the level of sugar in the blood. Diabetes is becoming much more prevalent ( = common or widespread) amongst children. 17. Health The condition of the body and the degree to which it is free from illness, or the state of being well. Fruit has several health benefits. Elderly people can have many health problems. The health care in the country is deteriorating ( =getting worse). There may be health risks from eating too much red meat. Health education is very important if we are to prevent illness and reduce medical costs. Sweden has one of the best health systems in the world. The population of the country is in good health. Lack of exercise can lead to poor health. He has a very healthy diet. I have a healthy appetite. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Essay Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? Food Additives Essay Model Answer Most foods that are purchased these days in small stores and supermarkets have chemicals in them as these are used to improve production and ensure the food lasts for longer. However, there are concerns that these have harmful effects. In my opinion, the potential dangers from this are greater than the benefits we receive. There are several reasons why chemicals are placed in food. Firstly, it is to improve the product to the eye, and this is achieved via the use of colourings which encourage people to purchase food that may otherwise not look tempting to eat. Another reason is to preserve the food. Much of the food we eat would not actually last that long if it were not for chemicals they contain, so again this is an advantage to the companies that sell food as their products have a longer shelf life. From this evidence, it is clear to me that the main benefits are, therefore, to the companies and not to the customer. Although companies claim these food additives are safe and they have research to support this, the research is quite possibly biased as it comes from their own companies or people with connections to these companies. It is common to read reports these days in the press about possible links to various health issues such as cancer. Food additives have also been linked to problems such as hyperactivity in children. To conclude, despite the fact that there are benefits to placing chemicals in food, I believe that these principally help the companies but could be a danger to the public. It is unlikely that this practice can be stopped, so food must be clearly labeled and it is my hope that organic products will become more readily available at reasonable prices to all. (Words 298) ELTS Causes and Effects Model Essay This causes and effects model essay is about obesity in children. You specifically have to talk about the causes (reasons) of the increase in overweight children, and explain the effects (results) of this. This particular essay is organized as follows: Body 1: Causes Body 2: Effects Of course it is also possible to have a 3 body paragraph essay. For example: Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Body 1: Causes Body 2: Causes Body 3: Effects Or: Body 1: Causes Body 2: Effects Body 3: Effects However, remember not to write too little on one part. For example, if you wrote one very short paragraph about 'causes' with little support and most of your essay on 'effects', you may then be seen to have not fully answered both parts of the question. Another possible way of organizing it is to put each cause and its effect within a separate paragraph: Body 1: Cause 1 - Effect Body 2: Cause 2 - Effect If you do this though, each particular cause must relate to that specific effect. Essay The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Causes and Effects Essay - Model Answer Over the last ten years, western societies have seen close to a 20% rise in the number of children who are overweight. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this worrying trend. The main cause of this problem is poor diet. Over the last decade there has been a prolific increase in the number of fast food restaurants. For example, on nearly every high street there is a MacDonald’s, Kentucky Fried Chicken and Pizza Hut. The food in these places has been proven to be very unhealthy, and much of the advertising is targeted at children, thus ensuring that they constitute the bulk of the customers of these establishments. However, it is not only due to eating out, but also the type of diet many children have at home. A lot of food consumed is processed food, especially with regards to ready-made meals which are a quick and easy option for parents who are working hard. The effects of this have been and will continue to be very serious. Firstly, there has been a large increase in health related diseases amongst children, especially diabetes. This debilitating illness means a child has to be injected with insulin for the rest of their life. Not only this, very overweight children often experience bullying from other children, which may affect their mental health. The negative stigma of being overweight may also affect self-esteem. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo To sum up, it is evident that there are several causes of obesity amongst children, and a variety of negative effects. Society must ensure steps are taken to prevent this problem from deteriorating further. (275 words) ________________ This cause and effect essay is about the issue of skin whitening products: why people are using them and their possible dangers for health and society. There are three things you must discuss: The reasons why they are used Their effects on health Their effects on society This causes and effects essay has been organized into two body paragraphs. The first dicussing the reasons, and the second discussing the effects on health and society. There are other ways to organize it of course. For example, you could have three paragraphs, each discussing one of the points above. Essay In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society. Cause and Effect Essay - Model Answer In many countries, particularly places like Asia, skin whitening products are incredibly popular and provide huge profits for the companies involved in their sale. This essay will examine the reasons why people use these products and the effects this has on people’s health and on society. The principal reason that people use skin whitening products is because whiter skin is seen to be more desirable than darker skin. To understand why, we need to firstly look at history. In ancient times, those people of a higher status tended to stay indoors, whilst people of a lower status worked outside, usually farming. As a result, those people who were indoors had much lighter skin, which means that whiter skin is now associated with having a higher status than dark skin. Another reason, which is partly related to this, is the desire for the ‘Western’ look. For example, plastic surgery to creat western eyelids and noses is common in Asia, and the white skin is part of this. These beliefs and images are also perpetuated in the media, with adverts showing people with white skin as more successful and attractive. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo However, despite the fact that having whiter skin may improve a person’s self-esteem, these products can have negative effects. Regarding health, there are reports that people are harming their skin permanently as some products bought over the counter have prescription-strength ingredients. For instance, some contain steroids or toxins which can severely damage the skin and other parts of the body. In terms of society, there are also detrimental effects. Such behaviour perpetuates the belief that ‘white’ is better than ‘black’, and thus those with darker skin may experience discrimination. In conclusion, people use whitening products due to the fact that white skin, usually through the media, is portrayed as more desirable. However, steps should be taken to change this image as the drawbacks of this are clear, with potentially dangerous consequences for people’s future health and society as a whole. (328 Words) Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Work Vocabulary 1. Employee Someone who is paid to work for someone else. The company has several hundred employees. 2. Employer A person or organization that employs people. Employers monitor their employees very carefully these days. 3. Employment When someone is paid to work for a company or organization. Due to the recession, there are thousands of people looking for employment. I was employed in the company for several years. 4. Unemployment Not working. Levels of unemployment in the economy have been rapidly increasing. He has been unemployed for 6 months now. 5. Commute To make the same journey regularly between work and home It is taking longer for people to commute to work because of traffic problems. Commuting to work everyday by bus is tiring. 6. Occupation Formal way to say 'job'. What is your occupation? 7. Career Working life or a particular job during one's working life that gets better in terms of salary and position. He is retired now but he had an amazing career ( = succesful working life). Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo He hopes to have a career in the army 8. Profession Any type of work which needs special training or a particular skill, often one which is respected because it involves a high level of education. The teaching profession is not as good as it used to be because salaries have decreased. 9. Salary / Wages Money paid each month to an employee for their work. Public sector salaries are not keeping up with inflation. He receives a good wage because he works for a prestigious company. 10. Public Sector Businesses and industries that are owned or controlled by the government. You get a good pension if you work for the public sector, but the salary is not always so good. 11. Private Sector Businesses and industries that are privately owned. Most graduates hope to work in the private sectorwhen they finish university as there are more opportunities and the pay is better than the public sector. 12. Retire To stop working because of old age or ill health. The retirement age in most countries is 65. He had to retire early due to ill health. 13. Flexitime Working a fixed number of hours but having flexibility with start and finish times. They have introduced flexitime at my work place so I usually start at 10am now and finish at 6pm. 14. Resign / Quit To leave a job. He resigned from his job yesterday. Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo Don't quit your job unless you have another one to start. 15. Fire / Sack /dismiss To remove someone from their job, especially because they have done something wrong He was fired / sacked / dismissed because he was late for work every day. 16. Vacancy A job postion that is not filled and so is available. I spoke to the company and they said they had several vacancies. 17. Overtime Working more than your contracted hours. The employees often work overtime but they are not given extra money so it is not fair 18. Shift The time worked in a job that is not normal hours. She is a nurse so she has to work in shifts. One week she does the morning shift, and then the next week she will do the night shift. Shift work can be very tiring. Essay The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs. It should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time and time with their families. How far do you agree with this statement? If we carry out a survey about whether the length of current working time is appropriate or not, it is sure that most of people asked will choose the negative answer. Nowadays, people have to work at least eight hours per day and six days per week. The remaining time for other activities is little and this leads to a number of psychological as well as social problems. Therefore I concur with some people who suggest that it is necessary to go down working time. First of all, the results of studies done by the experts from many countries show that there is a marked increase in psychological disease cases and the causes of those problems involve mainly with work. The diseases can be minor such as headache or more serious like depression and heart attack . People who suffer from those often have such heavy workload and pressured working environment that they cannot spend time for leisure pursuit. They feel Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo exhausted each time they finish work and sometimes a day for pastime is very difficult to arrange. Besides, I also long to emphasize the social issues due to hectic work. As an example, there is not much time for people and their children to meet and share problems as they go to work from the early morning until the evening. The distance between parents and children is lengthened. Children easily spoil and sometimes might commit crime. In addition to this, busy schedule work may result in the break in family happiness. This is reflected by the fact that the divorce rate have picked up significantly, recently. To sum up, I thoroughly approve that the decrease in working time is relevant. In the future, this problem should be discussed and legalised by the government to ensure the needs for entertainment and family care of people. IELTS Buddy Feedback: It’s a good answer with some good support for your ideas and well organized. You also have some good grammar and vocab. Corrected version: If we carry out a survey about whether the length of the current working week is appropriate or not, it is certain that most people asked will choose the negative answer. Nowadays, people have to work at least eight hours per day and six days per week. The remaining time for other activities is little and this leads to a number of psychological as well as social problems. Therefore, I concur with the people who suggest that it is necessary to reduce working time. First of all, the results of studies done by the experts from many countries show that there has been a marked increase in cases of physical and mental health problems and the causes of those problems mainly involve work. The illnesses can be minor such as headache or more serious like depression and heart attacks . People who suffer from those often have such heavy workloads and pressured working environments that they cannot spend time on leisure pursuits. They feel exhausted each time they finish work and sometimes a day for pastimes is very difficult to arrange. Besides, social issues also arise due to hectic work. As an example, there is not much time for people and their children to meet and share problems as they go to work from the early morning until the evening. As a result, the distance between parents and children is increasing. Children are easily spoiled and sometimes might commit crime. In addition to this, busy work schedules may result in a breakdown in family happiness. This is reflected by the fact that the divorce rate has picked up significantly recently. To sum up, I thoroughly agree that a decrease in working time is important. In the future, this Fanpage: : www.facebook.com/LUYENNGHETIENGANHPRO Admin : Heo problem should be discussed and legislation passed by the government to ensure the needs for entertainment and family care are ensured. FURTHER COMMENTS: Grammar “there has been a marked increase” = use present perfect for something that started in the past and is still happening now. Using the Correct 'Voice' “I also long to emphasize…” = Try to avoid using “I” except when giving your opinion in the introduction / conclusion, or maybe if you are giving an example about yourself to support an idea. Vocabulary Your first paragraph is a bit mixed up because you refer to ‘psychological problems’ in the topic sentence but then you talk about ‘physical problems’ i.e. headache and heart attack. You need to be careful about the differences. The first are to do with the mind and the others the body. Diseases = we don’t tend to use the word for mental health problems. It is usually used for physical problems with the body. Approve = signify satisfaction or acceptance. It can’t be used in this context. Check some sample sentences on the internet. "this problem should be discussed and legalized" = you have said here that we should ‘legalize this problem”. You can’t legalize a problem. “To legalize” means to make something illegal legal, so it does not apply here. I think you mean “the government should pass legislation to make working weeks shorter”.