HUNG VUONG UNIVERSITY
FACULITY OF FOREIGN LANGUAGES
NGUYEN TO GIANG
MIND MAPPING APPLICATIONS IN PRE-WRITING
STAGE TO ENHANCE STUDENTS’ WRITINGS UNITY
AND COHERENCE AT CHAN MONG HIGH SCHOOL
B.A GRADUATION PAPER
Field: English Teaching Methodology
Phu Tho, 2018
HUNG VUONG UNIVERSITY
FACULITY OF FOREIGN LANGUAGES
NGUYEN TO GIANG
MIND MAPPING APPLICATIONS IN PRE-WRITING
STAGE TO ENHANCE STUDENTS’ WRITINGS UNITY
AND COHERENCE AT CHAN MONG HIGH SCHOOL
Áp dụng sơ đồ tư duy trong bước chuẩn bị viết để nâng cao tính mạch lạc
và thống nhất trong bài viết của học sinh ở Trường THPT Chân Mộng
B.A GRADUATION PAPER
Field: English Teaching Methodology
Supervisor: Vu Thi Quynh Dung, M.A
Phu Tho, 2018
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
This
thesis
could
not
have
completed
without
the
help,
encouragement and support of a number of people who all deserve my
sincere gratitude and appreciation.
First and foremost, I would like to express my deepest gratitude to my
supervisor – Ms. Vu Thi Quynh Dung for the valuable guidance and
encouragement. She greatly inspired me to work on this paper. My graduation
paper cannot come to end without her effort to read it again and again to find out
the problems and support me in all stages of the research and writing this study.
I am also very grateful to some English teacher at Chan Mong high school,
Phu Tho province, who have been willing to answer my questions and have
given me valuable advice and suggestions on the research “Mind Mapping
Applications in pre–writing stage to enhance students’ writings unity and
coherence at Chan Mong high school” and on the completion of my research.
I owe sincere and earnest thankfulness to all the students of the classes
10A1 of Chan Mong high school, who have been the enthusiastic participants in
my action research. They provided me valuable information by completing the
conveying as well as doing the test. Without them, my action research could not
been completed and successful.
In the end, I would like to show my big gratitude to my family and
friends, who have constantly inspired and courage me to overcome difficulties to
complete this study.
Finally, a special word of thanks goes to my readers for their interest and
comments on this study.
Thanks for all!
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ABSTRACT
Based on the assumption that the more teachers know about brain science,
the better prepared they will be to make instructional decisions.
Mind Map is a powerful tool for assisting any form of writing. Language
is an important device and a very beneficial means for human being to
communicate with other people. Writing is one of the language skills that will
never be left in education.
The study identifies appropriate mind map techniques to enhance the
students’ writing ability. It reviews and examines the traditional techniques used
in teaching writing learners and identifies appropriate mind map techniques
along with an application procedure to enhance the writing skill.
This study objective is to test the feasibility of using mind map in prewriting stage for grade 10 students at Chan Mong high school. The researcher
carried out the experiment by teaching English and gives two tests for students.
The experiment phase continued for 4 weeks.
The participants of this study were 40 students at class 10A1. Prior to
experiment, participants of class 10A1 were given a pre-test in order to ensure
comparability of their essay writing. Having introduced the mind mapping
technique to members of class 10A1 (40 students) and finished the experiment
period, a post-test was administered to measure the effect of the intervention for
students. The data were gathered through pre-test and post-test.
The comparison between the pre and post test scores reveals a
significant difference in writing essay. The results indicated that the students,
who were taught through mind maps, improved unity and coherence; content
paragraph structure and length in writing. The results manifested that the
mind map is effective to use in teaching pre-writing stage in class 10 of Chan
Mong high school.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
PART 1: INTRODUCTION............................................................................... 1
1. Rationale of the study........................................................................................ 1
2. Research Purpose and Aims .............................................................................. 3
3. Research Questions ........................................................................................... 4
4. Significance of the study ................................................................................... 4
4.1. Scientific significance..................................................................................... 4
4.2. Practical significance..................................................................................... 4
5. Related Studies .................................................................................................. 4
5.1. In the world .................................................................................................... 5
5.2. In Vietnam ...................................................................................................... 6
6. Outline of the research ...................................................................................... 8
PART 2: DEVELOPMENT ............................................................................. 10
CHAPTER 1: THEORETICAL BACKGROUND........................................ 10
1.1. Overview of writing skill ............................................................................. 10
1.1.1. Definition ................................................................................................... 10
1.1.2. Approaches to teaching writing skills ....................................................... 12
1.2. Overview of pre-writing stage ..................................................................... 14
1.2.1. Definition ................................................................................................... 14
1.2.2. The importance of pre – writing stage in learning writing....................... 15
1.2.3. Techniques in pre-writing stage ................................................................ 16
1.3. Unity and coherence in writing .................................................................... 19
1.3.1. Unity .......................................................................................................... 19
1.3.2. Coherence.................................................................................................. 20
1.4. Mind map ..................................................................................................... 24
1.4.1. Definition of mind map.............................................................................. 24
1.4.2. Classifications of mind map ...................................................................... 26
1.4.3. Parts of Mind Mapping Technique ........................................................... 28
1.4.4. Relationship between Mind Map and Unity and Coherence in writing ... 29
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1.4.5. Steps for Making Mind Mapping Technique ............................................. 30
1.5. Summary of the chapter ............................................................................... 31
CHAPTER 2: METHODOLOGY ................................................................... 32
2.1. Research methods ......................................................................................... 32
2.1.1. Theoretical method .................................................................................... 32
2.1.2. Qualitative and quantitative methods ....................................................... 32
2.1.3. Analysis and synthesis methods ................................................................ 32
2.2. Subject of the study ...................................................................................... 32
2.3. Data collection instrument ........................................................................... 33
2.3.1. Classroom observation.............................................................................. 33
2.3.2. Interviews .................................................................................................. 34
2.3.3. Test ............................................................................................................ 36
2.3.4. Mind map application in pre-writing stage (Experiment) ........................ 38
2.3.5. Data analysis ............................................................................................. 40
CHAPTER 3: MAJOR FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION ............................. 41
3.1. An introduction of students and teachers at Chan Mong high school ......... 41
3.2. Participants .................................................................................................. 41
3.3. The current textbook English 10 .................................................................. 43
3.4.1. Data analysis of the class observations .................................................... 45
3.4.2. Data analysis of the interview questions for teachers .............................. 47
3.4.3. Data analysis of the tests ........................................................................... 50
3.5. Discussion .................................................................................................... 55
3.5.1. Discussion of the unity .............................................................................. 55
3.5.2. Discussion of the coherence ...................................................................... 56
PART III: CONCLUSION ............................................................................... 60
1. Conclusion ....................................................................................................... 60
2. Implication ...................................................................................................... 62
4. Limitation of study .......................................................................................... 65
5. Suggestion for further research ....................................................................... 65
REFERENCE .................................................................................................... 66
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LISTS OF TABLES AND FIGURES
1. List of Figures
Figures
Pages
Figure 1.1. Network Tree
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Figure 1.2. Event chain
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Figure 1.3. Cycle Concept Map
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Figure 1.4. Spider Concept Map
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Figure 3.1. The results of entry exam in grade 10A1 English subject
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Figure 3.2. The percentage of score levels according to pre-test results
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Figure 3.3. The percentage of score levels according to post- test results
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Figure 3.4. The percentage of score levels according to pre-test and
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post-test results
2. List of Tables
Tables
Pages
Table 2.1. Category descriptions for the assessment of coherence
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and unity
Table 3.1. Checklist of Writing Tasks in current Textbook
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“English 10”
Table 3.2. The result of classroom observation
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Table 3.3. Number of tests in score levels according to pre-test results
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Table 3.4. Number of tests in score levels according to post-test results
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Table 3.5. Number of tests in score levels according to pre-test and
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post-test results
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PART 1: INTRODUCTION
1. Rationale of the study
English is spoken as the first language by nearly 400 million people and as
the second language by 1.6 million people. As its popularity, our education system
attaches special importance to teaching and learning English in many school levels
from primary to university or higher education one. A plenty of programs and
methods were introduced aiming at raising Vietnamese’s English skills.
Along with the globalization trend, English has been considered as a
compulsory subject in the curriculum of all state schools. In order to keep pace
with the development of society, the need for good communication is put in one
of the top demand for English language including writing skill. It is undeniable
that writing skill plays a significant role in daily communication and educational
process. In spite of its importance, writing has long been the neglected skill in
second language for many years as writing is placed poor fourth.
Writing skill is a component of language skill with important role in
human life. Through writing activity, an individual can express his idea and
thought to achieve purpose and objective. For that reason, writing skill is the
language skill considered as most difficult to master compared with other skills.
Pouring idea and thought into writing should consider the grammar rule
corresponding to the correct spelling. However, while this activity is a part of
language ability aspect, writing skill gets inadequate particular attention.
Through writing, an individual can tell about idea, feeling, event, and object to
others. For that reason, this ability should be taught appropriately in elementary
school. But the reality proves that writing teaching is earned out incorrectly.
Writing learning aims to create the students with adequate writing skill.
The objective of research was basically affected by many factors such as
learning method, teachers’ teaching ability, student condition, learning
circumstance, learning material, learning motivation, learning interest, and
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learning media or aid. Effective communication in learning process will affect
the students’ success in achieving adequate outcome. Teacher can serve
effectively as a communication expert in the classroom.
Thanks to the innovation of ways in teaching English, English lessons are
taught with four skills (speaking, reading, listening, writing) in one unit.
Moreover, there exist three stages Pre – While – Post teaching in one lesson.
This really helps students improve their skills beside the grammar exercises to
pass the exams. Pre-writing stages are very important in teaching writing and it
also has significant effects on the students’ writing performance. Pre-writing
activities are supposed to the foremost phrase to start for a successful writing
task. Moreover, pre-writing stage could considerably solve the problem of ideas
stuck and raise the students’ interest in learning writing. If students do not
prepare well enough they can’t write well, they can’t even write anything in
their notebooks.
Paragraph unity is the most important characteristic of a good paragraph.
Students often got difficulties in stating idea or organizing ideas and connecting
the sentences when they wrote. Their writing result often did not have clear
meaning or it could not be understood. For example, they discussed more than
one topic in a single paragraph and the students could not use the appropriate
pronouns or transition signals in the paragraph. Therefore, the condition
automatically made the readers confused with the paragraph and they would not
get the information from the paragraph because it did not have unity and the
supporting details did not support the topic anymore and it was caused of
inappropriate words in connecting the sentences in the paragraph. Further,
paragraphs should also be coherent. Coherence demands that the ideas or
sentences presented in a paragraph should flow smoothly from one to the other.
Paragraphs should not only be well-developed and unified but also coherent. In
this lesson you will learn about paragraph unity and coherence without which a
paragraph cannot be called a complete composition.
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Mind mapping is the easiest way to develop information in a human mind
and take information from out of brain. It is a creative and an effective way that
map our ideas. Maps are easier to follow than the long tardy note taking or
listing techniques where ideas are kept in a top down sequence and it becomes
difficult to make connection of the last idea to the first in the list. Mind maps
can work as tool to facilitate the learners to plan ideas in the pre-writing process.
Learners can be provided with examples to prepare a step vise pattern in
hierarchy that would help them retain ideas till the whole of the essay is written.
Mind-mapping techniques are good to be applied in the pre-writing stage to
explore ideas and generate thoughts on the topic for writing. Mind-maps allow
gathering concepts in relation to the main theme. The concepts gathered this
way are coherent without the linear or inflexible structure of outlines, clustering
or listing ideas. The use of mind map can present information using images,
symbols, key words, codes and color to the level one wishes to do. This type of
organization of ideas can capture the spatial, bodily-kinesthetic, and visual
intelligences of some learners. As the content resembles that’s found on a topic
outline, the structure of the mind map is nonlinear and lends itself to
personalization by the student.
Students in general and Chan Mong high school students in particular have
difficulty writing to create unity and coherence in their writing. So, this the
reason why I decided to choose the title for my thesis: “Mind mapping
applications in pre-writing stage to enhance students’ writings unity and
coherence at Chan Mong high school” as the title of my thesis.
2. Research Purpose and Aims
The aims of study consist of:
- Exploring the current situation of pre-writing stage in writing lesson for
grade 10 students at Chan Mong high school.
- Designing and applying activities with mind-mapping techniques in prewriting stage for grade 10 students at Chan Mong high school.
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- Assessing the effectiveness of mind map techniques in pre-writing stage
to create unity and coherence for grade 10 students at Chan Mong high school.
3. Research Questions
There are three research questions, based on the focused objectives of the
study accordingly. They are:
1. What are the different techniques used by the teachers of Chan Mong high
school in pre-writing stage?
2. How should mind mapping be applied effectively in pre-writing stage to
enhance student writings' unity and coherence?
3. Is there any relationship between mind-mapping in pre-writing stage and the
unity and coherence of student's writings?
4. Significance of the study
4.1. Scientific significance
Conducting this study firstly helps the researcher obtaining a
comprehensive understanding about using Mind Map in studying and teaching
in general and in a pre-writing stage in particular.
4.2. Practical significance
This research is carried out with the hope that it can apply mind map in
pre-writing stages of grade 10th students at Chan Mong high school, Phu Tho
province. In addition, the research also help the teachers of English use mind
map in writing lessons of their students more effectively, which may make
writing lessons more meaningful and interesting, help students improve and
enhance unity and coherence in writing skill.
5. Related Studies
In this part, previous researches about using mind map in pre-writing
stage to create unity and coherence in writing lesson in Vietnam and overseas
will be presented.
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5.1. In the world
Al Jarf (2009) in “Enhancing Freshman Students’ writing skills with mind
mapping soft-ware” investigated the compelling distinction among the group of
students who used the software of Mind Mapping while writing and the ones who
did not. The researcher stated that the software of Mind Mapping could be used to
help students in brainstorming, development of new ideas, making correlations
among various concepts and supporting details as students face problems in
propagating ideas in EFL and writing paragraphs with topic sentences and
supporting details. This study was performed by considering freshman students as
a sample of research, who were divided into two groups, i.e., experimental and
control. The results of post-test showed that the members of the experimental
group had higher gains in their final writing. Students in the experimental group
wrote on the posttest showed more relevant details and better organized and
connected ideas than paragraphs written by the control groups. Most of the
students in the experimental students drew mind maps by hand for the topic they
had to write about to help them visualize and organize ideas.
Al Naqbi’s (2011) in “The use of Mind Mapping to develop writing skills
in UAE Schools” carried a survey to evaluate the effectiveness of mind map at
the pre-writing brainstorming stage under exam condition. Actually, her primary
purpose was not to aim to the high results of the students, yet she aimed to help
students in planning and organizing ideas in writing. She noticed that during the
exam students performed differently due to the limited time when they
addressed the writing test at school and thus she believes mind mapping strategy
could assist students to eliminate difficulties in writing. As a result, after
conducting the research, she found that students’ thinking and cognitive skills
were developed and students became better in organizing ideas, activating their
background knowledge. This proved that mind map has a powerful effect on
students in the pre-writing stage and it was worth teaching this technique to EFL
students in classes.
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Riswanto and Putra (2012) in “The use of mind mapping strategy in the
teaching of writing at SMAN 3 Bengkulu, Indonesia” conducted research in
Indonesia on the appropriateness of the mind mapping strategy while providing
training in writing. The design of pretest-posttest disparate groups was used by
the researchers. As the study was carried out in the town of Bengkulu, 234
students of the first year of SMAN3 were the population of the study during the
academic year of 2011/2012. A total of 66 students were selected as a sample
and divided into two groups. The writing test was conducted in order to collect
data, and t-test was used as the tool for analysis of the data. Results showed a
compelling distinction was present in the writing accomplishment of the
students taught with the use of the strategy of mind mapping. Hence, it is
evident from this study that writing achievement of students can be enhanced
through the application of the mind mapping strategy.
5.2. In Vietnam
The writer also did try to review on the literature of the research problem
from the resources in the university library.
Dang Thanh Diem ( 2011) researched about “Using mind maps and
diagrams to teach vocabulary for first year mainstream students, faculty of
English language teacher education” with the study aims at figuring out
whether the techniques work to teach vocabulary at Division I. The study began
with the literature review on vocabulary teaching and the application of mind
maps and diagrams in teaching vocabulary. Then the paper-based questionnaires
were delivered to students to explore the situation of the research problem. After
that, the true-experimental method was applied in data collection procedures to
fulfill the second aim of the research. The findings of the study indicated that
mind maps and diagrams were applicable and effective to teach vocabulary at
Division I. Therefore, the techniques were suggested to be exploited more in the
context of teaching vocabulary for first year students.
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Do Thi Van Trang (2016) researched about “Using mind map to improve
vocabulary knowledge for the first year English language teaching education
students of FLF at HPU2”with the study aims at investigating the common ways
of learning vocabulary' and their difficulties in studying vocabulary; introducing
the mind- map technique to the first year English Language Teaching Education
at HPU2 as well. First, to learn about the current ways of learning vocabulary, the
survey questionnaire was conducted with 48 students of K41 English Language
Teaching Education. Second, a pre-test and post-test were done to appreciate the
quality of vocabulary studying among these students before and after the
treatment during five weeks of the second semester of the 2015-2016 academic
school year. Last, the classroom observation also was used to find whether
students like the technique. Based on the results of these methods, the difficulties
of students in learning vocabulary have been found out as well as Mind Map
technique was introduced received positive responds from students.
Nguyen Thi Thu Huong (2013) researched about “Enhancing the efficiency
of the presentation through the use of mind mapping for K8 major English
students in Hung Vuong University” with the study aims at researching and
valuating the use of Mind Mapping in enhancing the efficiency of a presentation.
They use pretest and posttest to survey the current situation then point out the
effective of using mind map in presentation for students. The result is quite
satisfactory because the number of students getting low reduces considerably. The
marks of posttest are improved. It makes the study more successful.
These above researches study about using mind map in teaching such as:
using mind-map in teaching writing skill written by Jarf (2009), Al Naqbi’s
(2011) and Riswanto & Putra (2012) and using mind-map to enhancing the
efficiency of the presentation written by Nguyen Thi Thu Huong (2013) and using
mind map to teach vocabulary written by Dang Thanh Diem (2011) and Do Thi
Van Trang (2016). Besides, the previous studies have also provided valuable
information indicating that use mind map to help students improve skills such as
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writing, presentation and learning vocabulary. Moreover, those studies
investigated the effectiveness of applying mind map in teaching and developing
skills above. The researchers find out some new methods which are useful for
teaching English at high school.
However, there have no researches about using mind map in pre-writing
stage to create unity and coherence for grade 10 students. Moreover, this is the
first time the study on mind mapping applications in pre-writing stage to enhance
students’ writings unity and coherence in writing lessons of grade 10th students at
Chan Mong high school, Phu Tho province is carried out in Hung Vuong
University. So, I will choose research about this issue with hope that this method
can help the lesson more and more vivid, effective to the teachers and students.
6. Outline of the research
The study consists of three main parts:
Part I: Introduction
Part I – “Introduction” covers academic routines required for graduation
paper, namely rationale for the study, aims of the study, research questions,
scope of the study, research methods, significance and an overview of the
study’s organization.
Part II: Development
This part consists of 3 main chapters
Chapter I – “Literature Review” provides the theoretical background of
the study consisting of some basic knowledge of English pre-writing, mind
maps, unity and coherence in writing lesson for the grade 10th students.
Chapter II – “Methodology” Research objectives, method of the study,
instruments, data collection and data analysis are discussed in this chapter.
Chapter III – “Major findings and Discussion” This chapter also analyzes
the data collected from classroom observation, interview for English teacher and
result of tests and discussion in details.
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Part III: Conclusion
This part summarizes the major findings of the study, pedagogical
implications of using mind maps in pre-writing stage, some recommendations
that will be given to help students improve their writing skill, lists limitations of
the study and suggestions for further studies.
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PART 2: DEVELOPMENT
CHAPTER 1: THEORETICAL BACKGROUND
In this chapter, the knowledge of using mind map in pre-writing stage to
create unity and coherence, the theories, ideas and opinions related to using
mind map in writing lesson. Beside, some previous studies in our country and in
the world related to the topic will be shown for readers to widen knowledge and
get more information about other studies which have nearly similar topic with
the research.
1.1. Overview of writing skill
1.1.1. Definition
In teaching a language, writing is considered one of the four language
skills (speaking, listening, reading) that a learner is expected master. It has been
argued that the term writing seems to be very common and familiar in language
teaching and learning. The ability to write fluently and expressively is
something that all language learners regardless of whether the language in
question is a first, second language finds it hard to achieve. All children, apart
from those with physiological disabilities, want to write, in fact, need to write,
before they want to read. There have been numerous definitions of writing each
of them is the reflection of its author’s view of the writing process.
Leki (1976) pointed out that writing is one of the four language skills
(speaking, listening, reading and writing) that a learner is expected to master.
Writing is the process in which the writer expresses his thoughts or ideas in the
form of handwriting. Writing is communicating. Good writing gets your ideas
out of your head and into the reader’s head without losing or distorting those
ideas. To understand thoroughly the nature of writing, some more academic
definitions of writing should be studied.
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Donn Byrne (1988), the author of “Writing and teaching writing” states
that “Writing can be considered as the act of forming graphic symbols (letters or
combination of letters) which relate to sounds we make when we speak. It is
somehow like the making marks of flat surface of some kinds. However, writing
is not just the production of graphic symbols, just as speech is more than
production of sounds” (1988:1). In other words, it is obviously much more
complicated than the production of graphic symbols. “ Writing is the process of
transforming the material discovered by research inspiration, accident, trial and
error, or whatever in to a message with a definite meaning” (1988:3).
Tribble (1996) stated that writing is a language skill which is difficult to
acquire. It is a process that occurs over a period of time, particularly if we take
into account the sometimes extended period of thinking that precedes creating
an initial draft. Tribble also stressed that writing normally requires some form of
instruction and that it is not a skill that is readily picked up by exposure. His
point of view, involved two kinds of skills. The first one was low-level skill
such as handwriting or typing, spelling, constructing grammatical sentences,
organizing and sequencing, structuring, drafting and editing, the other one was
advanced level skill such as writing a novel, a work or a play.
Hedge (2000) described “Writing is the result of employing strategies to
manage the composing process, which is one of gradually developing a text. It
involves a number of activities, setting goals, generating ideas, organizing
information, selecting appropriate language, making a draft, reading and
reviewing it, then revising and editing. It is a complex process which is neither
easy nor spontaneous for many second language writers.
In short, from all these opinions above, it is obvious that no definition can
possibly capture all the ideas and features of what writing is. Each linguist’s
definition reflects what writing means as seen from his own point of view.
However, they all have some features in common, they share the same
ideas that writing as a complex skill is one of the four basic skills in learning and
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teaching of English. It is not only a means of communication where students can
share their views and thought, it is actually a pre requisite to master other
language skills.
1.1.2. Approaches to teaching writing skills
According to Nunan (1991), there are various ways to teach writing but
the two most common applied at present arc product and process approaches.
1.1.2.1. The Product Approach
Traditional approaches to the teaching of writing focus on the product. In
other words, the product approach is a traditional one that has been applied by
many schools, colleges and universities in Vietnam for a long time. This
approach is differently defined by different educators.
Nunan (1991) reviews that the product approach favors classroom activities,
prefers organizations of ideas to ideas, emphasizes on grammar exercises and
correctness, and focuses on the result of the final writing paper of learners.
Accordingly, Steele (2006) states that the product approach is a traditional
approach, in which students are encouraged to mimic a model text, which is
usually presented and analyzed at an early stage.
White (1988) defines the product approach as the emphasis on
grammatical correctness and adherence to given models or guidelines.
Typically, the authors suggest the following steps:
Step 1: The teacher introduces a topic
Step 2: The students are told to complete a composition (within a time limit) and
to work alone.
Step 3: The students submit the written work.
Step 4: The teacher grades the work, identifies errors, and hands back the work
to the students.
Step 5: The students make corrections.
Step 6: The next writing class, the teacher repeats the above procedure.
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However, if the product approach is applied, there are many obstacles
facing the teachers and the students as follows. First, imitating models may
inhibit students rather than liberate them. Thus, there may be little or no
opportunity for the students to add any thoughts or ideas of their own when they
follow a model as presented by Raimes (1983). The inevitable consequence is
that little attention is paid to the ideas and meaning of student writing, what it
communicates to the reader, the purpose, and the audience (Raimes, 1983).
In short, most of the authors agree that product writing focuses more
on form than content, which may prevent the students from developing their
creativity and confidence in learning writing skills.
1.1.2.2. The Process Approach
The process approach to writing, an innovation in a product-oriented
culture (Cheung, 1999), has been seen as an improvement over the traditional
method of writing instruction in recent years.
Leki (1991) states that the process approach is an approach to teaching
writing that places more emphasis on the stages of the writing process than on
the final product.
According to Badger and White (2000) define: “writing in process
approaches is seen as predominantly to do with linguistic skills, such as
planning and drafting, and there is much less emphasis on linguistic knowledge,
such as knowledge about grammar and text structure" (p. 154). In the approach,
students are taught planning, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing strategies
at each stage of the writing process to help them to write freely and arrive at a
product of good quality.
Steele (2006) also confirms that process approaches to writing tend to focus
more on the varied classroom activities which promote the development of
language use; brainstorming, group discussion, re-writing.
The above authors all share a number of stages in process writing as follows:
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